For several years, I wrote a personal blog. I spent a lot of time writing about my life, family and my writing endeavors. In July of 2009, I went to a Writers Conference and had some nice feedback from an agent. She told me that she thought I should start sending our queries. In August, I sent out my first official query, and soon after, got my first official rejection. Below is what I wrote then (names removed to protect the innocent).

Excited by my wonderful experience at the Harriett Austin Writer’s Conference, I decided to get on the ball and start sending query letters to literary agencies. I’ve sent out 5 so far. One has already gone out of business. Yea ME!

But I hadn’t heard from any of the others until yesterday.

Ms. Tyre,

Thank you for considering the _______ in your search for representation. I would like to start by apologizing for the delay in replying to your query. I was considering it for some time but due to the volume of queries I’ve received in the last few weeks, I am going to have to pass. I appreciate you giving me the opportunity to review your work. I’m glad to find so many other people who are passionate about YA and truly I wish you the best luck in your search for the right agent (and hope to see you in print soon).

Best regards,

Did you see that? She said – I was considering it for some time! Someone actually read an excerpt of my story and WAS CONSIDERING IT.

Until she opened the other 893 queries and decided to give me the heave ho. It’s a start.

It’s funny how a rejection, done well, can still be encouraging.

Rejection is a part of the writing life. I got SEVERAL letters like the one above before I found my dream agent. Don’t give up!

Keep writing!




When I got a message last week from Brenda Drake regarding filling in as a mentor for Pitch Wars, I was hesitant. I wanted to be involved, but I’m on deadline with my own revisions, and it would make things a little tight.  Still, the absolute best thing about this whole publishing process for me has been the ability to connect with and encourage other writers, so I decided to go for it. I am so glad I did! I’ve been happily reading submissions since Friday and I’ve already been reminded of some very important lessons.

1. The QUERY is vitally important.

The first thing I did when I got my submissions was to quickly read through the queries. There were several that really popped and I couldn’t wait to read the 1st chapter.  Because I want to give everyone a fair shake, I read everyone’s 1st chapters, not just the ones that grabbed me, but a busy agent would probably just pass. Work that query until it shines before submitting.

2. The FIRST CHAPTER is ALSO vitally important.

There were some real standouts in my folder. Whether it was the voice that I connected with, the hook, or just good old-fashioned story-telling, I wanted to read more. Obviously, you don’t want just one good chapter; the whole book has to be well done, but a great first chapter shows what you’re capable of producing. Make that first chapter sing!

3. REJECTION Does Not Mean What You Think It Means

If you’re participating in Pitch Wars, your ears are probably burning. The mentors have been talking about their favorites, trying to decide which ONE they will eventually pick. There are several entries that consistently show up on all the lists, but due to the ONE limitation, there’s a good chance many good ones won’t get picked. In the end, we have to choose based on what manuscript speaks to us, which ones can we connect with, and which ones we feel like we can help. I’ve had particular issues when revising my debut novel, and it gives me perspective to help the novels that have the same issues. It doesn’t mean that I don’t love other submissions just as much, but again, I can only choose ONE. Rejections come for many reasons, but when an agent tells you that it’s just not the book for them, don’t take it personally. There are others who will love it.

4. TIMING is Key.

I stepped in when one of the mentors had to drop out and I’m not sure she would make the same pick that I eventually choose. Maybe. Every mentor has their own likes and dislikes, just like agents. There’s really nothing you can do about timing, other than to show up and do the work consistently. When my book was out on submission, a great editor replied that she really liked it. Yay! The problem was they already had a similar book set to launch. Bummer. Agents change jobs right after they’ve asked for more pages, editors who are interested in your novel retire, books come out with your same hook – don’t let it get to you. Just keep writing and it will eventually land on the right desk at the right time.

5. Be proud of what you CREATE.

I have read so many fun stories. Even when they’re in the same genre, written for readers of the same age, they are all different and interesting and creative. What really gets me is that these are stories that DID NOT EXIST before the writer put them to paper. How awesome is that? Getting a publishing contract is a good thing, but don’t ever forget that you created something from nothing. That is something no one, and no rejection slip, can ever take away.

Good luck to everyone involved in Pitch Wars. You’re already awesome in my book.



Agents Books Rejection Writing

is still a NO.


Thank you so much for sending along THE JUNKMAN’S DAUGHTER. There is so much to love about this manuscript. The voice pulled me in right away, as did your offbeat sense of humor. The mystery is a delicious one as well. The only reason I have been hesitating for a while on this is that the plot seemed a little crowded to me. There’s the whole yarn of them having to figure out how to get the book from the historian. (Going in the hotel room and how they got out of it was one of my favorite scenes!) There’s also the sports/racism/news/University visit. I know it is very important to the plot but it started to feel a little… busy. For a middle grade novel, it sure covers a lot of ground.

Now, I’m very interested in you as a writer. I think you’ve got great talent and potential. But I just don’t think this is 100% ready for me to take on. If you do figure out a way to simplify (or you get similar notes and end up revising), please do think of me. I’d love to read it again.


(Agent I don’t Hate)

So there you have it. The best rejection letter I’ve gotten thus far. Here’s my response to her:

Dear Mary,

Thank you for taking the time to read my manuscript. I appreciate your kind words and constructive feedback. The revision suggestions are great, and I look forward to jumping right in. And by “jumping right in”, I mean “after I drink myself into a mild hangover”.

Seriously, your comments ring true and I believe they will make the book stronger. When I’m done revising, you’ll be the first to know!

Thanks again.

Hey, it’s way better than the one I sent where I threatened VOODOO. I’m growing.